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The animation is a bit crude, but it looks alright - a lot better than some 'first flashes'.
The nose on that one side-view (the person in colour) didn't look very good to me, though.
Lack of sound is really going to hold back the score; even if you can pick up extremely cheap headphones from a discount store, that's probably enough to let you hear sounds and add them.
A longer animation, and a definite start and end point could also improve it.
*just some suggestions*